Although you seem to have made an effort to talk about a good number of things on the advert, your analysis is not in depth enough. You have described things but not really said WHY they are there or WHAT EFFECT they might have on the audience. You need to always talk about the effect of something when you analyse it.
Answer me these questions and I will post your grade.
1) What is the effect of having a famous celebrity like Justin Timberlake in your advert?
2) What does the word "Revolution" actually mean and why might it be good to have it in your advert? What might it make people think about your product?
this is very bad because it is not interasting =. it has no colour euther no affence
ReplyDeleteAlthough you seem to have made an effort to talk about a good number of things on the advert, your analysis is not in depth enough. You have described things but not really said WHY they are there or WHAT EFFECT they might have on the audience. You need to always talk about the effect of something when you analyse it.
ReplyDeleteAnswer me these questions and I will post your grade.
1) What is the effect of having a famous celebrity like Justin Timberlake in your advert?
2) What does the word "Revolution" actually mean and why might it be good to have it in your advert? What might it make people think about your product?