I really like your advert John. You have chosen images that link well to the product and give the audience a good idea of what to effect. To improve it further it would be great if you could: * Make the website stand out a little bit using "outer glow" effects on the writing as at the moment it is a little hard to see against the dark background * Add in a slogan which is a catchy sentence to sum up your product for an audience. This could go at the bottom in the middle maybe? Ask me if you need help / ideas with this.
I really like your advert John. You have chosen images that link well to the product and give the audience a good idea of what to effect. To improve it further it would be great if you could:
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* Add in a slogan which is a catchy sentence to sum up your product for an audience. This could go at the bottom in the middle maybe? Ask me if you need help / ideas with this.
PRODUCTION = B+